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1339.一只蜜蜂他光亮的马车--ED

热度 2已有 1634 次阅读2013-11-7 11:33 |系统分类:诗歌| received, frank, 玫瑰

一只蜜蜂他光亮的马车
明晃晃地驶向玫瑰---
他自己--他的马车--
落下熔入不见--
玫瑰以真诚的平静
接受了他的拜访
没有对他的贪心
隐瞒一片花瓣
她们完美的时刻--
只留给逃避的他--
她只留狂喜
还有谦逊。
A Bee his burnished Carriage
Drove boldly to a Rose —
Combinedly alighting —
Himself — his Carriage was —
The Rose received his visit
With frank tranquillity
Withholding not a Crescent
To his Cupidity —
Their Moment consummated —
Remained for him — to flee —
Remained for her — of rapture
But the humility.

发表评论 评论 (3 个评论)

回复 吴丽水 2013-11-13 09:38
有丰富想像力,高度的语言透析能力。
回复 平林 2013-12-6 16:09
她只留狂喜
还有谦逊。
这首诗好喜欢
回复 orchid 2013-12-6 16:19
爱情好美,无怨无悔付出

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