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热度 1已有 2397 次阅读2011-5-9 02:35 |个人分类:原创诗歌|系统分类:诗歌

  用“在”字造句

我坐在桌前,在小房间里,面对一堵白墙。

我在家。

阳光在我的窗外。

一群大男孩在小区对面的草地上。

他们在踢球。

我不在写字的时候,我抬起头,低头看着他们在草地上追跑。

我知道总还有一些人在绿地那一边的楼里,不过我看不穿那蓝色的玻璃墙。

无论我是否在看,他们中肯定有些人也在看那些人踢球。

我不在对面的楼里。

在星期六,许多人会走进那座楼,坐在公共图书馆里阅读。

他们坐在那些长长的桌子两边,长桌中间隔着一块毛玻璃。

一个男孩和一个女孩坐在这样的一张桌子两边,被一块毛玻璃分开。

在玻璃的每一面,都贴着一张字条,上面写着“请保持安静”。

那两张告示贴在同一个位置,好像是同一张纸条,有两张脸,向着两个方向。

那男孩和那女孩在同一张桌子旁读书,不知道彼此在读什么。

这些大多是我坐在桌前看到的,有一些是我在看到的基础上添加的。

我还在桌前,在家,周六正随着阳光消逝。

            201158-9

英文的是“用介词造句”,汉语中尽量用“在”来对应英文中的不同介词。 

  Making Sentences with Prepositions

I sit by a desk, facing a white wall in a small room.

I am at home.

The sunrays are outside my window.

A group of big boys are on the green field across the residential quarter.

They are playing football.

When I am not writing, I look up and look down at them running in the grass.

I know there are always people in the building beyond the green lot, although I can not see through the blue glass wall.

There must be people looking down at the players, whether I am looking or not.

I am not in the opposite building.

On Saturdays, many people go into that building, reading in the public library.

There are a boy and a girl now sitting at two sides of one of the long reading tables, separated by a frosted glass.

On each side of the glass there is a notice that reads “Please keep quiet.”

The warnings are stuck on the same position of the glass, as if they are one piece of paper with two faces to two directions like Janus.

The boy and the girl are each reading a book at the same table, but they do not know what each is reading.

Most of these are what I see when I am sitting by my desk, and some are added on the basis of what I have seen.

I am still by the desk, at home, as this Saturday is going by with the sunrays,

                  May 8, 2011

 

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回复 平林 2011-5-9 05:23
那两张告示贴在同一个位置,好像是同一张纸条,有两张脸,向着两个方向。

也许,那男孩和那女孩正在读一样的书;也许,他们在读同一类书,而论点相左。

更有可能的是,虽然他们都在读书,但他们读的书彼此毫无关系。

这些只是我坐在桌前看到的,我又在看到的基础上想到了一些可能。

我还在桌前,在家,周六将要随着阳光消逝。

冒昧的想这段加花的畅想如果没有,可能前面的更加耐人寻味。
回复 得一忘二 2011-5-9 09:47
有道理,稍加修改。多谢好意见。

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