英诗中译： 高中的草坪 翻译：郁序新

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高中的草坪

作者：托马斯-哈代

翻译：Tulip

灰色佩玫红

白里蓝色明

鞋系男袜筒

袖口一色青

纯白褶绒边

暗处光影绵

闪闪射草坪

绿树入眼帘

午日照路边

有人绕场奔  

笑声漫天飞

汇成瀑布音

惟有独笑随

铃声影消去   

即刻归静悄

时光断断续

来日方又朝

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2013年6月3日

翻译：Tulip

The High-School Lawn

by Thomas Hardy

Gray prinked with rose,

White tipped with blue,

Shoes with gay hose,

Sleeves of chrome hue;

Fluffed frills of white,

Dark bordered light;

Such shimmerings through

Trees of emerald greenare eyed

This afternoon, from theroad outside.

They whirl around:

Many laughters run

With a cascade's sound;

Then a mere one.

A bell: they flee:

Silence then: --

So it will be

Some day again

With them, -- with me.

本诗按原诗的韵脚ABABCCBDD  EFEF  GHGHG 尝试翻译，用五言词来表达，

原诗除第八九行为8个音节外，其余都为4个音节。请各位诗人斧正,谢谢！